Tuesday, February 3, 2009

Red (critique and edit from Flickr)


Red
Originally uploaded by Howard00


Ahhh, the impact that this has! wow!

The juxtaposition of the red and the black adds impact and is very dramatic. The concept of this photograph captured by Howard is awesome, but there are some definite areas that could be improved to make this great idea a perfect photograph. (1) I am not sure what lighting effect you were going for, but either the dark side/bright side needs to be much more contrasted OR it needs to be much more evened out (2) her skin tone has a cast to it (3) her lips need to be burned in a little, as does the lower left shoulder.

I do not have the RAW file but here is an edited version of Howard's fabulous girl. Lisa

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